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I took this photo last summer during my holidays.
I remember that day very well.
In this photo you can see three people.
As you see, he looks very friendly.You can’t see me because I’m taking the photo.In the background are the Park.
I keep this photo in my album because looking at this photo makes me go back in that time.
I keep this photo in my album because looking at this photo makes me go back in that time.
I decided to show this photo to you because it carries pleasant memories.
That’s all I wanted to say.

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- I took this photo last summer during my holidays.
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- I remember that day very well.
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- In this photo you can see three people.
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- As you see, he looks very friendly.You can’t see me because I’m taking the photo.In the background are the Park.
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- I keep this photo in my album because looking at this photo makes me go back in that time.
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- I keep this photo in my album because looking at this photo makes me go back in that time.
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- I decided to show this photo to you because it carries pleasant memories.
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- That’s all I wanted to say.
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