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  • Hardball

  • Free time from work and education my daughter, I spend in the company of my friends playing hardball.
  • Of course, you probably want to ask me what kind of game it is, how to play, and what are the rules, because probably you have not heard about it before.
  • And no doubt, I will answer you.
  • Hardball is a tactical game that simulates military combat action and is a relative of the famous paintball game.
  • The main difference between paintball and hardball is that unlike the above game, we use as shells for our air guns not gelatinous balls filled with multi-colored coloring liquid, but full metal jacket bullets caliber 4.5 mm.
  • I foresee your next question, in which you want to know how dangerous it is to play and how often the player's injuries occur.
  • Firstly, I should know that each participant obliged to wear special ammunition and a protective helmet.
  • I must assure you that all guns are checked on special chronometers before each fight.
  • Those players whose weapons are accustomed to the fixed speed of the bullet cannot be allowed to play.
  • As for the hit itself, I must admit that yes, it sometimes is very painful, but never leads to more serious injuries than a common bruise.

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    • Of course, you probably want to ask me what kind of game it is, how to play, and what are the rules, because probably you have not heard about it before.
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    • Hardball is a tactical game that simulates military combat action and is a relative of the famous paintball game.
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    • The main difference between paintball and hardball is that unlike the above game, we use as shells for our air guns not gelatinous balls filled with multi-colored coloring liquid, but full metal jacket bullets caliber 4.5 mm.
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    • I foresee your next question, in which you want to know how dangerous it is to play and how often the player's injuries occur.
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    • As for the hit itself, I must admit that yes, it sometimes is very painful, but never leads to more serious injuries than a common bruise.
      투표하세요!
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