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  • Please, would you want to correct my display? Thanks a lot ;)

  • Hi everyone !
  • My name is Mathilde, I'm French and I'm 24 years old, I live next door to the city of Lille and I live very close to Belgium.
  • I'm student in Social Work, and I was student in Visual Art long enough.
  • My favorites pastime are cinema (especially old school horror movies, science-fiction, thriller...), music (rock, rockabilly, hard rock, heavy metal, trash metal, metal, trip-hop, drum'n'bass, electro....), concerts, festivals, photography, painting, drawing, video art, video games, motorcycle and motorbike ride (I have a custom), reading, writting novels, and more ...
  • I would like travelling and getting to know new countries and cultures, learn differents lifestyle...
  • However, I speak English poorly, so... please be understanding ;) Finally, I've already been in England, Spain, Germany, Netherlands.
  • Therefore, I'd like to speak to people who live in these countries

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    • My name is Mathilde, I'm French and I'm 24 years old, I live next door to the city of Lille and I live very close to Belgium.
      투표하세요!
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    • My favorites pastime are cinema (especially old school horror movies, science-fiction, thriller...), music (rock, rockabilly, hard rock, heavy metal, trash metal, metal, trip-hop, drum'n'bass, electro....), concerts, festivals, photography, painting, drawing, video art, video games, motorcycle and motorbike ride (I have a custom), reading, writting novels, and more ...
      투표하세요!
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    • However, I speak English poorly, so... please be understanding ;) Finally, I've already been in England, Spain, Germany, Netherlands.
      투표하세요!
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