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  • my phone

  • today i'am so sad. why? because i lost my lovely phone. the only phone i have. and now i'am so confused. i don't have money to buy new phone. i really sad. why can happened? because i so careless. oh my god that's so stupid. and i feel guilty to my mom. because that phone is from my mom. and i lost that phone.
  • until right now,i'am not tell about this problem to my mom. because i'am afraid,i really afraid. so what must i do?

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    • today i'am so sad. why? because i lost my lovely phone. the only phone i have. and now i'am so confused. i don't have money to buy new phone. i really sad. why can happened? because i so careless. oh my god that's so stupid. and i feel guilty to my mom. because that phone is from my mom. and i lost that phone.
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