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  • Today ı want to talk about my nephews.their names are mete and uras...mete is one year and a month ,uras is one year and three months..they are so cute and adorable..ı love them..mete lives close us but uras lives 3 hours away by car.he is nearly away us..ı see mete everyday..sometimes he stays with us..they bring joy our family..your timekilling is to play with them..time stops when ı play with them..you forget all unhappiness and frustrations at work...your family becomes serenitier..
  • ı want to marry soon and have a baby because if u are parents.your world changes...your children become your everything and it is a very good emotion...ı realize it from my sister and brother in law'S eye..
  • ı wish u have a baby who is smart,cute :)

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    • Today ı want to talk about my nephews.their names are mete and uras...mete is one year and a month ,uras is one year and three months..they are so cute and adorable..ı love them..mete lives close us but uras lives 3 hours away by car.he is nearly away us..ı see mete everyday..sometimes he stays with us..they bring joy our family..your timekilling is to play with them..time stops when ı play with them..you forget all unhappiness and frustrations at work...your family becomes serenitier..
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    • ı want to marry soon and have a baby because if u are parents.your world changes...your children become your everything and it is a very good emotion...ı realize it from my sister and brother in law'S eye..
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