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melt me down!
melt me down!
In mellifluous content Of the crucible of your chest, To dissolve myself free In your ineffable feelings, So I can see In the brightness of your eyes, The radiance of your love.

Rodolfo85April 2017100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- melt me down!
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- melt me down!
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- In mellifluous content Of the crucible of your chest, To dissolve myself free In your ineffable feelings, So I can see In the brightness of your eyes, The radiance of your love.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2