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Team sports help people develop a stronger character than individual sports do.

Nowadays, most people play individual and team sports.

Some people think that team sports make people strong and confident persons, while others claim that individual sports are more useful in the development of strong character.

From my point of view, people should do team sports because they provide charitable impact on a person's character.

Firstly, young people, who play team sports, grow up more comnunicative than others.

It can help them in their future life.

Secondly, there is rivalry between members of a team.

It can be useful for the development a person's character because if you play team sports, you always want to be the first, and it forces you to become stronger and cleverer than other members of a team.

However, some people believe that people should play individual sports help to develop a stronger character more than team sports do.

In their view, individual sports help people be strong, confident, clever and successful.

If you do individual sport, your coach pay his attention only to you.

It gives you an opportunity to achieve excellent results and succeed in your sports career.

However, I disagree with the above opinion.

I am convinced that players of a team is more successful than players of individual sports.

In conclusion, I believe that people should pkay sports because it improves your physical and mental health.