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  • homeschooling

  • The right to an education is one of our fundamental human rights.
  • Parents send their children to schools in order to obtain an education, and to cultivate sociality.
  • However, There are a growing number of parents who choose homeschooling.
  • School had been considered to be the ideal learning environment in the past, because the teachers are trained, and provide an appropriate, standardized curriculum for all school students.
  • Parents who choose homeschooling believe that it is a better learning environment because the learning can be tailored specifically to a child’s needs, school can’t be able to provide suitable education for individual student of thirty students.
  • Some parents hesitate choose homeschooling, because they think interaction with others is crucial, worry about their children would be lack of sociality.
  • There are numerous social and extra-mural clubs which homeschooled children still have access to, so children would not be isolated.

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    • School had been considered to be the ideal learning environment in the past, because the teachers are trained, and provide an appropriate, standardized curriculum for all school students.
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    • Parents who choose homeschooling believe that it is a better learning environment because the learning can be tailored specifically to a child’s needs, school can’t be able to provide suitable education for individual student of thirty students.
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    • Some parents hesitate choose homeschooling, because they think interaction with others is crucial, worry about their children would be lack of sociality.
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    • There are numerous social and extra-mural clubs which homeschooled children still have access to, so children would not be isolated.
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