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Hi!
Dear Most Valued and Esteemed Friend, your attention is invited to the project-the idea A group of White Daisy - Volunteers against child deaths!
Save the hungry children of Africa!
Proposed a project to save the hungry children of Africa!
You need to collect the package of food to send to hungry children in South Sudan, Somalia, Nigeria,Yemen and other countries where children die of hunger.
Gathоer with friends a few packages and you will save the children.
If the world we send the package we will be able to save all the children of Africa. Join us!
please - spread the idea in the press and social networks to rescue starving children volunteer packages with food from around the world. so we will save all the hungry children

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- Hi!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- Dear Most Valued and Esteemed Friend, your attention is invited to the project-the idea A group of White Daisy - Volunteers against child deaths!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- Save the hungry children of Africa!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Proposed a project to save the hungry children of Africa!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- You need to collect the package of food to send to hungry children in South Sudan, Somalia, Nigeria,Yemen and other countries where children die of hunger.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Gathоer with friends a few packages and you will save the children.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- If the world we send the package we will be able to save all the children of Africa. Join us!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- please - spread the idea in the press and social networks to rescue starving children volunteer packages with food from around the world. so we will save all the hungry children
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8