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  • HARMS AND BENEFİTS OF VİDEO GAMES

  • Nasa scientists express that video games increase the vigilance and concentration.The most important risk of the computer games is to provoke of violence.It especially causes children of negatif analysis and attitude.But video games are a tool like a television as well.If they are used for a right goal,it can be a good achievement for technology Hyperactive child who has a lack of attention are impatient and energetic.

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    • Nasa scientists express that video games increase the vigilance and concentration.The most important risk of the computer games is to provoke of violence.It especially causes children of negatif analysis and attitude.But video games are a tool like a television as well.If they are used for a right goal,it can be a good achievement for technology Hyperactive child who has a lack of attention are impatient and energetic.
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