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從Mar21來的文本 - English

Ouch.
Yesterday, I was skating with my skate next to the beach with my best friend, Michael.
I was talking with him about our favorite rock band when, suddenly I fell over.
The pavement was wet because of the day-before rain and I slided off.
It was awful, everybody was looking at me and Michael was laughing about me.
My knee and my elbow hurt.
He saw my pained face and, quickly, he called the emergencies.
The ambulance arrived and they took me to the hospital.
Now, I'm writing this from my bed, I have my right arm and my right leg bandaged.
I won't be able to walk for four weeks.
I don't even know how I'm writing this.

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- Yesterday, I was skating with my skate next to the beach with my best friend, Michael.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I was talking with him about our favorite rock band when, suddenly I fell over.
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句子 3
- The pavement was wet because of the day-before rain and I slided off.
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- It was awful, everybody was looking at me and Michael was laughing about me.
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- My knee and my elbow hurt.
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- He saw my pained face and, quickly, he called the emergencies.
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句子 7
- The ambulance arrived and they took me to the hospital.
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- Now, I'm writing this from my bed, I have my right arm and my right leg bandaged.
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句子 9
- I won't be able to walk for four weeks.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- I don't even know how I'm writing this.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10