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  • Character from a serie

  • If I had to be a character from a serie, I would belong to Chicago Fire.
  • According to me, the context of the serie is the most attractive : the job you’re doing everyday, the atmosphere at the firestation, the relatioshoph you build, etc..
  • On the one day, each new day is a surprise : you don’t know what you can do, what incredible fire you may see or which people you will hep.
  • In my humble opinion, it’s the feeling of not having a routine, the feeling of the adrenaline when you’re hearing the siren’s sound or experiencing the speed of the trucks, which make you feel alive.
  • On the other hand, things firemen experience in their dailylife make them really close each other, and being a part of this family sould be amazing.
  • Having really close friends, which are not only workmates but brothers and sisters remind you you don’t have only a work, but mainly a passion.
  • Moreover, I had been a character of Chicago Fire, I would have been Stella Kidd.
  • First of all because she’s a strong firewoman, brillant in her job.
  • She’s persevering, brave, intelligent ; I would be proud to prouve through hert hat women can be firefighters, especially on a huge town as Chicago.
  • Beside, I am fond of her tenacious character : she’s competitive and as seeing she has lots of humour, we cannot be bored with her.

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    • According to me, the context of the serie is the most attractive : the job you’re doing everyday, the atmosphere at the firestation, the relatioshoph you build, etc..
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    • On the one day, each new day is a surprise : you don’t know what you can do, what incredible fire you may see or which people you will hep.
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    • In my humble opinion, it’s the feeling of not having a routine, the feeling of the adrenaline when you’re hearing the siren’s sound or experiencing the speed of the trucks, which make you feel alive.
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    • On the other hand, things firemen experience in their dailylife make them really close each other, and being a part of this family sould be amazing.
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    • Having really close friends, which are not only workmates but brothers and sisters remind you you don’t have only a work, but mainly a passion.
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    • She’s persevering, brave, intelligent ; I would be proud to prouve through hert hat women can be firefighters, especially on a huge town as Chicago.
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    • Beside, I am fond of her tenacious character : she’s competitive and as seeing she has lots of humour, we cannot be bored with her.
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