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I was so tired
I was playing soccer today, and i was very tired my legs hurt and my breathing was so bad,I wanted to drink but there was not even a bottle of water.

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- I was playing soccer today, and i was very tired my legs hurt and my breathing was so bad,I wanted to drink but there was not even a bottle of water.
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- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1