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  • Mr

  • I will tell you about my job and my activities today.
  • In the morning i was playing tennis.
  • And then i went to my office.
  • I work at a university in bandung.
  • I have a dream, i want to study abroad.
  • I want study in university of minnesota.
  • Tommorow i will meet my promotor to discuss about that. Thank you

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