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  • People have become too dependent on technology.

  • Nowadays, everyone uses a computer and a smartphone.
  • Some people think that people are too dependent on technology, while others claim that people use it only for work and studying.
  • In my opinion, modern people have dependency on technology.
  • Firstly, nowadays, most people work on the Internet.
  • It means that their lives depend on the Internet very much because their work is boubded with computers.
  • Secondly, our health is dependent on technology too because with its help doctors treat many disease.
  • Finally, nowadays, a lot of types of work are done by machines and robots.
  • So, it means that the development of science and economy is dependent on technology too.
  • However, some people believe that humans being can live without any technology.
  • In their view, it is only assistant for people.
  • For example, the Internet helps pupils with their studying.
  • But they can study without it because there are a lot of libraries.
  • However, I disagree with the above opinion.
  • I am convinced that technology is one of the most necessary elements in our life.
  • So many things like medicine, science, economy and education are dependent on it.
  • In conclusion, I believe that people should use technology very carefully because it can lead to adverse consequences.

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