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  • The Rainy Days#1

  • I loved rainy day.I lived a boring and meaningless life before 18,just like most of the students in Asia.It was easy to feel pleasure because of the weather changing.To me,it meant that:"Today is not as normal as usual. ".
  • In the rainy days,my friends and I always walked out the classroom in break time, went downstairs to the pond which near the teachers offices.It was so delightful to see the raindrop fell down from the cloudy and gray sky then touched the water surface briskly.
  • As soon as the rain drop into the pond and cause ripples,the fat fishes under the water thought that someone was throwing foods,so those cute animals swam to us with their opening ,big and funny mouse to ask us for feeding them.
  • This is one of the memory about rainy day which was belong to me and my best friend in senior high school.

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  • câu 1
    • I loved rainy day.I lived a boring and meaningless life before 18,just like most of the students in Asia.It was easy to feel pleasure because of the weather changing.To me,it meant that:"Today is not as normal as usual. ".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • In the rainy days,my friends and I always walked out the classroom in break time, went downstairs to the pond which near the teachers offices.It was so delightful to see the raindrop fell down from the cloudy and gray sky then touched the water surface briskly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • As soon as the rain drop into the pond and cause ripples,the fat fishes under the water thought that someone was throwing foods,so those cute animals swam to us with their opening ,big and funny mouse to ask us for feeding them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • This is one of the memory about rainy day which was belong to me and my best friend in senior high school.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4