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DebbyK'den mesaj - English

  • The Rainy Days#2

  • Most of the impressive memories of mine was related to rainy days.
  • On a Monday morning,my dad didn’t go to work because of the weather.
  • I felt blue and annoyed since I really didn’t want to go to school.The rainy days of summer in Taiwan always humid,my uniforms was not dry enough during the plum rain season.Whenever I wore in the ugly and standard clothes,my mood was getting depressed.
  • Due to my junior high school wasn’t far from my home,I went for class by bicycle everyday in the period of that time.It was drizzling outsite in the morning on that day,so my dad took a old raincoat to me.I carried a heavy package on my back,wore a stupid khaki raincoat and left home.As soob as I rode on bike,I found that the raincoat was too tight,I couldn’t control my shoulders and arms easily.
  • Our house was surrounded by the paddy fields,there were ditches next to the road.
  • I was ridding along the side of the road which was close to the ditch,then a car was passing by me with fast speed──My body lose the belance and I fell down into the ditch.It was so embarrased that the ‘‘car accident’’ happened on me in front of my home,I just left the house for about 2 meters,I even hadn’t pass by my neighbor’s house! My dad heard the sound and walked out,he wanted to know what happened outsite,then he saw his clumsy daughter with no surprisely.I walked back to the house after moved out from ditch and change another uniform which was not dry enough,either.
  • After that,my dad drived me to school and somehow,I didn’t feel low and upset anymore.Because a ‘‘funny’’ thing happened on me,my mood turned better after relized that today is not an another boring day.
  • Even I found there was a long and deep wund on my legs after I felt painful and took off my pants for checking, I still shared with the ‘‘interested experience’’ to my classmates happily.
  • It was another menmory about a rainy day which was get impressive to my dad and her silly daughter

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    • I felt blue and annoyed since I really didn’t want to go to school.The rainy days of summer in Taiwan always humid,my uniforms was not dry enough during the plum rain season.Whenever I wore in the ugly and standard clothes,my mood was getting depressed.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • Due to my junior high school wasn’t far from my home,I went for class by bicycle everyday in the period of that time.It was drizzling outsite in the morning on that day,so my dad took a old raincoat to me.I carried a heavy package on my back,wore a stupid khaki raincoat and left home.As soob as I rode on bike,I found that the raincoat was too tight,I couldn’t control my shoulders and arms easily.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
  • cümle 6
    • I was ridding along the side of the road which was close to the ditch,then a car was passing by me with fast speed──My body lose the belance and I fell down into the ditch.It was so embarrased that the ‘‘car accident’’ happened on me in front of my home,I just left the house for about 2 meters,I even hadn’t pass by my neighbor’s house! My dad heard the sound and walked out,he wanted to know what happened outsite,then he saw his clumsy daughter with no surprisely.I walked back to the house after moved out from ditch and change another uniform which was not dry enough,either.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 6YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6
  • cümle 7
    • After that,my dad drived me to school and somehow,I didn’t feel low and upset anymore.Because a ‘‘funny’’ thing happened on me,my mood turned better after relized that today is not an another boring day.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
  • cümle 8
    • Even I found there was a long and deep wund on my legs after I felt painful and took off my pants for checking, I still shared with the ‘‘interested experience’’ to my classmates happily.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 8YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8
  • cümle 9