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  • progress in english

  • Hello, I want to progress in english.
  • I studied it but i'm afraid to speak Could you help me to speak better?
  • In first time i explain to you who i am.
  • My name is Myriam.
  • I live in Barsac from France.
  • It's un little city products of white wine very famous (Sauternes).
  • I'm 43 years old.
  • I'm two childrens.
  • One boy, 17 years old and one girl, 15 years old. I'm a nurse.
  • My job consists to introduce the people for a depist of the VHI or ITS.
  • It's a good job.
  • It's a preventive health.
  • I care for the people in the sexuality to reduce the risk.
  • Thank you for your time. Myriam

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