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I whant improve my English
My name is Sara, I'm 27 years old and I living in Italy.
I study English from 3 yars to improve it.
I love this language and I whant came in England for improve my English

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- I whant improve my English
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- My name is Sara, I'm 27 years old and I living in Italy.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I study English from 3 yars to improve it.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I love this language and I whant came in England for improve my English
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3