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  • III.University (it's for an important oral exam)

  • (Hi everyone, please pay attention to this text, it's really important to me :) I'd like to thank you if you correct it.
  • It would be really nice of you, it's the third part of my oral .
  • Students may be required to repay their debts for several years because the cost is very high.
  • For exemple we've seen a video where Anabelle a former student presented her situation.
  • She graduated 2 yeas ago and she has got a huge debt of 000 and that could swell to $ 100000 if she continues to pay minimum monthly payments of nearly $ 900 per month.
  • On the same video we've seen the situation of a student of philosophy, he thinks that his debt will last 20 years.
  • Some students think that it's normal to pay that expensive for their studies and also to have debts in order to have a good job (even if they will have to repay their debts).
  • However, he said « If You want to do what you really want you have to pay ».
  • In spite of the very high cost of the studies, some means have been set up to help students.

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    • (Hi everyone, please pay attention to this text, it's really important to me :) I'd like to thank you if you correct it.
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    • She graduated 2 yeas ago and she has got a huge debt of 000 and that could swell to $ 100000 if she continues to pay minimum monthly payments of nearly $ 900 per month.
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    • On the same video we've seen the situation of a student of philosophy, he thinks that his debt will last 20 years.
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    • Some students think that it's normal to pay that expensive for their studies and also to have debts in order to have a good job (even if they will have to repay their debts).
      투표하세요!
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