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Văn bản từ Embing - English

  • Why I Interested to take a part in this event?

  • Indonesia has million Students.
  • But some students is not interested about leadership or thing that he must prepare since he was teenagers.
  • Today, global education is a transformative learning process that is very essential in creating and promoting mutual understanding across racial, cultural, religious, political and geographical divides.
  • Young people as agents of change must have a lot of responsibility in fostering global understanding and peace through creating awareness.
  • I interested to take a part in this scholarship because I want to make the change for myself.
  • I want to learn more about leadership and how I can improve my Public Speaking ability.
  • I hope I can learn Japanese culture there and make relation with some International friends.
  • I just want to make my parents proud and I will do the best.
  • I want to show them that I can success because I hope I can passed this scholarship and will bring Indonesia to International forum.
  • I want to open my mind that I’m not alone here, I have thousand competitor out there.
  • I want to make this chance to change my mind that I must make the good change for myself and Indonesia.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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    • But some students is not interested about leadership or thing that he must prepare since he was teenagers.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • Today, global education is a transformative learning process that is very essential in creating and promoting mutual understanding across racial, cultural, religious, political and geographical divides.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • Young people as agents of change must have a lot of responsibility in fostering global understanding and peace through creating awareness.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • I want to show them that I can success because I hope I can passed this scholarship and will bring Indonesia to International forum.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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