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  • GIANT PANDA

  • Dear Charity Committee, The purpose of this email is to show how important to support the Giant Pandas is.
  • Giant Panda is a kind and friendly animal, very popular for us, above all for children, nevertheless is pretty rare.
  • Pandas are at risk of becoming extinct.
  • There are just 1000 Giant Pandas in the wild.
  • All of them, in the mountains of Central China.
  • The population of Giant Panda is decreasing due to pollution and the action of the human being.
  • For instance, because of the cutting down of bamboo, which is their only way of food.
  • Besides there are hunters in spite of the prohibitions.
  • On top of that, they do not reproduce in captivity hardly ever, that is why there are only about 100 Giant Pandas in zoos all over the world.
  • All things considered, I firmly believe that we must support this endangered species, and this should be a priority for your Charity Yours faithfully,

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