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Yesterday i saw the beauty of the moon shining all the night in my face today i see the clouds in the heaven creating the castle of my life, yesterday i heard some voices in my head singing your name and now my heart is beaten to be with u again.

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- Yesterday i saw the beauty of the moon shining all the night in my face today i see the clouds in the heaven creating the castle of my life, yesterday i heard some voices in my head singing your name and now my heart is beaten to be with u again.
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- AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 1