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Văn bản từ Yonan - English

  • try to write a Poem 1.1

  • The light shine on me -Dear Moon The darkness no exist any more since you are here shining my life, i know that u and me could be working together until the End No matters if u and i are totally different only to be with u can be arrive until the highest mountain you can save my life and my soul only you know how to make me happy and find my strenghts you are the reason why im writing this poem you are my reason to shine all the Galaxy -The sun

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    • The light shine on me -Dear Moon The darkness no exist any more since you are here shining my life, i know that u and me could be working together until the End No matters if u and i are totally different only to be with u can be arrive until the highest mountain you can save my life and my soul only you know how to make me happy and find my strenghts you are the reason why im writing this poem you are my reason to shine all the Galaxy -The sun
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