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Juliya1235 szövege - English

  • 4-5 weeks' holiday

  • The standard 4-5 weeks' holiday that employees receive is insufficient for dealing with stress.
  • Nowadays, most workers have 4-5 weeks' holiday.
  • Some people think that it is enough to relax, while others claim that it is too small period of time for dealing with stress.
  • In my opinion, employees can relax during this interval of time.
  • Firstly, a worker can travel to another countries and have acrest during this period of time.
  • He can study other cultures and visit new places.
  • Secondly, if an employee has a bigger holiday than 4-5 weeks, hecan lose an interest in his job and job's skills.
  • Finally, have days off every week.
  • So I think that they have enough time to relax and deal with stress.
  • However, some people believe that workers' holidays is too small to recovery from their jobs.
  • In their view, employees cannot deal with stress during 4-5 weeks' holiday because they have to worry very mush and spend a lot of energy during their work.
  • However, I disagree with the above opinion.
  • I am convinced that people have an opportunity to deal with stress every day during their time of rest.
  • So 4-5 weeks' holiday is enough to relax.
  • In conclusion, I believe that workers should relax a bit every day because it is important for their physical and mental health.

KÉRLEK, SEGÍTS KIJAVÍTANI MINDEN MONDATOT! - English