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Love a man older me
Hi everybody, I write to talk you my particular love story.
I'm 27 years old and I'm fall in love to a man older me.
He is a 45 years old, single without kids.
He is a man very simple, honest, not more hight, funny, love kids and he is like their.
My dream is going to London and merry us.

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- Hi everybody, I write to talk you my particular love story.
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- I'm 27 years old and I'm fall in love to a man older me.
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- He is a 45 years old, single without kids.
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- He is a man very simple, honest, not more hight, funny, love kids and he is like their.
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- My dream is going to London and merry us.
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