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Text from Juliya1235 - English

  • Assessing teachers

  • Just as teachers assess their students, so students should assess their teachers.
  • A lot of students think that they have a right to assess their teachers.
  • Some people think that it is improper and impossible, while others claim that pupils can evaluate their tutors.
  • From my point of view, students cannot assess their teachers.
  • Firstly, assesssing students is one of the responsibilities of tutors.
  • They should do it because it is their jobs.
  • Secondly, people study a lot before they can teach children and assess them.
  • So I think that most students do not have necessary skills for assesssing teachers' work.
  • Finally, I believe that children and teenagers do not have any rights to evaluate their teachers because they do not have enough experience to assess adult people.
  • However, some people believe that students should assess their tutors.
  • In their view, they can evaluate teachers' work on students' levels of knowledge and give them an assessment of their work.
  • However, I disagree with the above opinion.
  • I am convinced that students donot have enough experience, knowledge and skills for evaluating their teachers.
  • They can assess teachers on their attitude to them but they cannot evaluate tutors' work impartially.
  • In conclusion, I believe that children should respect their teachers.

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