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  • You did a great presentation.
  • She was helpful to the audience.
  • However, if you have paid attention to the fact that the third part of the presentation was listened to all?
  • The theme of this part does not fit the type of your audience.
  • Next time pay attention to it.
  • In addition, the attention of the audience by the end of the presentation was lost.
  • Maybe next time make it shorter?
  • Besides, it would be a good idea not to read the text on the slides.
  • You can use it as a Supplement to his speech.
  • And finally, would you like to attend courses in English together with me next week?
  • I think we will benefit.
  • I hope I helped you. See you soon.

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