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  • South Korea, the anti-shield people against the US are not afraid of Kim “Only praying shall save us all” Upraising in Seongju against Pyongyand’s defence system “No more arms, we want peace.
  • The division between the two countries will broaden in this way” The American shield that is supposed to save us from Kim’s bomb lies just around the corner, on a hill guarded by an impassable cordon of police officers.
  • But, the Buddhist nuns, camped 24 hours a day in the chapel-tent nearby, stated that this holy Thaad is not only useless but also dangerous.
  • Praying would work better for protecting us from the H bomb.
  • The shield will divide our countries even more” said kim deok-in while handing out cookies who had taken in Iksan, a village just two hours and half far away from there.
  • We don’t want other weapons, we want peace, as sweet as Seongju melons.
  • The tiny and yellow melons are really sugary, even if the local farmers claim that USA radars will poison them, also.
  • If praying is a shield better than the AN/TPY-2 rays, this is a matter of faith.
  • What is certain is that litanies are for free, whereas the bill presented by Trump to Seul is stiff, that is to say one billion dollars.
  • Also, the partial ‘Wall Street Journal’ published that this request, after a while discarded, irritated so many people that the new candidate anti-Thaad has gained advantage in the upcoming elections next Tuesday.
  • The former prime minister was booted out and sent to jail for a round of shortcuts and payoff which had been set up by her shaman friend.

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    • South Korea, the anti-shield people against the US are not afraid of Kim “Only praying shall save us all” Upraising in Seongju against Pyongyand’s defence system “No more arms, we want peace.
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    • The division between the two countries will broaden in this way” The American shield that is supposed to save us from Kim’s bomb lies just around the corner, on a hill guarded by an impassable cordon of police officers.
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    • But, the Buddhist nuns, camped 24 hours a day in the chapel-tent nearby, stated that this holy Thaad is not only useless but also dangerous.
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    • The shield will divide our countries even more” said kim deok-in while handing out cookies who had taken in Iksan, a village just two hours and half far away from there.
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    • The tiny and yellow melons are really sugary, even if the local farmers claim that USA radars will poison them, also.
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    • What is certain is that litanies are for free, whereas the bill presented by Trump to Seul is stiff, that is to say one billion dollars.
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    • Also, the partial ‘Wall Street Journal’ published that this request, after a while discarded, irritated so many people that the new candidate anti-Thaad has gained advantage in the upcoming elections next Tuesday.
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    • The former prime minister was booted out and sent to jail for a round of shortcuts and payoff which had been set up by her shaman friend.
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