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Gimbal Kids
my trip to Dieng a few days agos brought me with two kids Gimbal by chance.
Spontaneously, I asked to my guide to took some pics with them, but it was not easy to persuade them to take a photo.
Well, i kept approaching and let them play.

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- Gimbal Kids
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- my trip to Dieng a few days agos brought me with two kids Gimbal by chance.
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- Spontaneously, I asked to my guide to took some pics with them, but it was not easy to persuade them to take a photo.
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- Well, i kept approaching and let them play.
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