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Text from Juliya1235 - English

  • Online news sites

  • Online news sites are always factual, truthworthy sources of information.
  • Nowadays, most people use online news sites.
  • Some people think that they are the best sources of information, while others claim that they includes a lot of inaccurate information and unfair advertising.
  • From my point of view, online news are not always factual, truthworthy sources of information.
  • Firstly, there are a lot of online news sites on the Internet.
  • So it is really difficult to find a good one, which includes truthful information.
  • Secondly, the Internet has many false facts.
  • Hey are used by criminals to deceive people.
  • Finally, online news sites are a recent invention.
  • So it requires a lot of time, work and modification.
  • However, some people believe that newspapers, TV and radio programmes are less truthworthy and factual sources of information than online news sites.
  • In their view, online news sites have truthful facts because a lot of specialists work on it.
  • However, I disagree with the above opinion.
  • I am convinced that online news sites have a lot of unnecessary and false facts.
  • I think that newspapers, TV and radio news programmes choose information for publication more carefully.
  • In conclusion, I believe that people should choose a source of information, founding on their interests, by themselves.

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