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proposal of library
Most students use every day the library despite of the difficulties we have there.
Extending the library would have a number of significant benefits for the college.
Firstly, more books of science and software should be bought because actually the is not enough space for them.
Nowadays, many teachers order us to do group work and sometimes we don´t have a proper room at home in order to be concentrate and we prefer meeting outside to the library.
So we would be grateful to have some classes near the library where the books are.
Las but not least, computer with Internet access should be bought and installed.
In doing so, the college could improve the research facilities at the college.
College like ours, which encourage their students to learn and get their goals, need a better library and a good equipment such as books an computers.

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- Most students use every day the library despite of the difficulties we have there.
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- Extending the library would have a number of significant benefits for the college.
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- Firstly, more books of science and software should be bought because actually the is not enough space for them.
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- Nowadays, many teachers order us to do group work and sometimes we don´t have a proper room at home in order to be concentrate and we prefer meeting outside to the library.
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- So we would be grateful to have some classes near the library where the books are.
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- Las but not least, computer with Internet access should be bought and installed.
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- In doing so, the college could improve the research facilities at the college.
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- College like ours, which encourage their students to learn and get their goals, need a better library and a good equipment such as books an computers.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8