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Сообщение от Lesheey - English

  • Sport

  • There are different opinions in regard to the question of whether people should perform regular fitness trainings and practice athletic games.
  • While modern humanity prefer to devote a lot of time on workout, this is often considered unimportant by society, ignored obvious insufficient physical development of the population.
  • In contrast, this essay will put forward the notion that this trend is undoubtedly positive.
  • First, this position will be proven by an analysis of the quality life of amateur athletes.
  • A discussion of the social and personal benefits for the individuals who are periodically attend sport sections and gyms will also support the view stated above.

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