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Text from carmen2017 - English

  • Write a letter to the former students

  • Dear students, We have the placer of invinting you to our 25 th anniversary.
  • It is third of June and we would like to celebrate with you.
  • First, we want to thank everyone their support.
  • We set up the college with only eighty students and half of them were from poor families.
  • At the beginning we couldn´t make end meets but some charities gave money to us every month in order to follow our goal and every child could receive a good education.
  • Second, our teachers have always been outstanding and wonderful in manny respects.
  • We hava tried to hire qualificadied and enthusiastic teachers.
  • For instance, everyone can remember Ann, who left us last year, she conveied her interest to students.
  • Another example, springs to my mind, Paul, the teacher of Chemistry, got that their students were interested in working in the lab.
  • However, we also keep in our mind when students used their computer better than us.
  • For these all reasons, we were thinking about a celebration.
  • We asked our students how we could have a party.
  • The vast mayority of them wanted concerts and to arrange a dinner among other things.
  • So, we have signed a contract with a famous gropu of music, which is surprise, and after that we have dinner in our patio.
  • It will be the best party you have never been.
  • We are looking forward to hearing if you come.
  • Yours faithfully. Headmaster.

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