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Text from Juliya1235 - English

  • Famous people must learn to expect that their lives will never

  • It is a common knowledge that journalists and other people follow celebrities all the time.
  • Some people think that stars should have some private life, while others claim that people should learn to expect that their lives will never be private before they become famous.
  • From my point of view, I believe that fans should not follow their favourite stars all the time.
  • Firstly, the children of celebrities should not be followed by journalists and other people.
  • It impacts their lives a lot, and it can become the reason of their mental disorder and other diseases.
  • Secondly, famous people have a lot of hardships in their relationship with their love partners because they do not have a private life.
  • Their love partners are also followed by a lot of people.
  • It can become the reason of their loneliness.
  • However, some people believe that celebrities should get used to the constant observation.
  • In their view, before a person becomes famous, he should learn that he does not have a private life after this.
  • It is the fee fof fame.
  • However, I disagree with the above opinion.
  • I am convinced that everybody has a right to have a private life.
  • In conclusion, I believe that celebrities have a right to protect their privacy, and other people should respect it.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English