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Hi everyone
I'm Juliet, I'm from Argentina and I love this language, but with the school I can't learning more.
This social red help me so much, and I greeting to you'll.
I need your corrections.

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- Hi everyone
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- I'm Juliet, I'm from Argentina and I love this language, but with the school I can't learning more.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- This social red help me so much, and I greeting to you'll.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I need your corrections.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3