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  • WHAT AMENITIES ARE THERE IN A CITY?

  • Firstly, It must be said that some people love living in a village or in a city with their difficulties or their amenities.
  • In this day and age, there are certain advantages of living in both situations easily.
  • Anyway, I rather to live in the city than in the village.
  • I believe that there are more amenities and also more entertainments.
  • There are certainly more amenities, for instance: you have medical care near your home, which is pretty important.
  • On top of that, there are a lot of public transports, therefore you do not depend on anyone or anything.
  • In addition, there are more infrastructures than in the village.
  • On the other hand, I believe that the entertainments are important in our lives nowadays.
  • Everybody knows that in the cities there are a lot of things to do: theatre, cinema, swimming pools, a great variety of studies… In contrast, some people want to live in a village due to the suitable environment, peaceful place, less noise…Nevertheless, to sum up I firmly believe that there are more amenities in the city which help you in your daily life.

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    • Firstly, It must be said that some people love living in a village or in a city with their difficulties or their amenities.
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    • There are certainly more amenities, for instance: you have medical care near your home, which is pretty important.
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    • Everybody knows that in the cities there are a lot of things to do: theatre, cinema, swimming pools, a great variety of studies… In contrast, some people want to live in a village due to the suitable environment, peaceful place, less noise…Nevertheless, to sum up I firmly believe that there are more amenities in the city which help you in your daily life.
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