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Do you want to be my friend?
Today I met a guy so nice. I liked him.
I presented me to him, and he told me new words that I was unknown.
He show me what he can do, play.
And I thought "I should be his friend, I liked his company, and what he's speak me".
So I asked him "would you like to be my friend?".
He said me "I like you, so I can say yes"

Ellie_MalankovMay 2017100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Today I met a guy so nice. I liked him.
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- I presented me to him, and he told me new words that I was unknown.
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- He show me what he can do, play.
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- And I thought "I should be his friend, I liked his company, and what he's speak me".
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- So I asked him "would you like to be my friend?".
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- He said me "I like you, so I can say yes"
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