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  • India

  • India, country Populated with 1,27 millards of inhabitant with New Deli as capital, India is the second country the most populated behind China.
  • India is a very diverse country on the ethnic, linguistic and religious plan.
  • This country knows a fast development, but this development is the consequence of numerous economic and social contrast.
  • In economic India numerous sectors developed digging so some more of gap between rich and poor.
  • Indeed the biggest and the branches of industry in India are the agriculture, the textile, the technology, but also the tourism.
  • These last years the tourism and the technologies are sectors with the biggest economic growth.
  • Numerous tourists come in India for for the traditions of the country but also for its monuments as Taj Mahal.
  • India attracts many multinationals which commits the workers who speak English and who cost much less dear when Europe.
  • The success of the high-tech industries attracts of numerous Indians who return in their native country.
  • This phenomenon is called " brain game " which is the result of an increase of the number of middle-class potential consumer.
  • However not far from the places of tourism and the heavy industries is still of numerous shanty town with an important poverty.
  • This day 35 % of the population lives with only 1 dollar a day.
  • The poverty in India is very visible in streets because of numerous shanty town.
  • In these shanty towns the life is very hard because there is no tap water, no electricity, no toilet, little food, and a lot of corruption.
  • Many children suffer from malnutrition.
  • In cities 60 % of the inhabitants have no access is clean toilets and 20 % in the campaign.
  • The fast growth of India and thus responsible for one more wide gap between the rich and the poor people which is very well visible in streets.
  • In spite of the modernization technology of India it remains a traditional society divided into caste, that is every person belongs to a "category" of nobody from the birth.
  • A person belongs to the same class as his parents and it is normally impossible to change caste.
  • There are 5 different castes: brahmin ( the priests), the kshatriya ( the warriors), the vaishya ( the storekeepers), the sundra and the last class compound of the poorest people which makes the most horrible works such as take care of dead animals: the untouchable.
  • This system of caste is a part of India traditional, and in spite of the efforts of the government to remove these disparities, the society does not change.

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    • India, country Populated with 1,27 millards of inhabitant with New Deli as capital, India is the second country the most populated behind China.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
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    • This country knows a fast development, but this development is the consequence of numerous economic and social contrast.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
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    • Indeed the biggest and the branches of industry in India are the agriculture, the textile, the technology, but also the tourism.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
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    • India attracts many multinationals which commits the workers who speak English and who cost much less dear when Europe.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
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    • This phenomenon is called " brain game " which is the result of an increase of the number of middle-class potential consumer.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
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    • However not far from the places of tourism and the heavy industries is still of numerous shanty town with an important poverty.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
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    • In these shanty towns the life is very hard because there is no tap water, no electricity, no toilet, little food, and a lot of corruption.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14
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    • The fast growth of India and thus responsible for one more wide gap between the rich and the poor people which is very well visible in streets.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17
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    • In spite of the modernization technology of India it remains a traditional society divided into caste, that is every person belongs to a "category" of nobody from the birth.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 18DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 18
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    • There are 5 different castes: brahmin ( the priests), the kshatriya ( the warriors), the vaishya ( the storekeepers), the sundra and the last class compound of the poorest people which makes the most horrible works such as take care of dead animals: the untouchable.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 20DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 20
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    • This system of caste is a part of India traditional, and in spite of the efforts of the government to remove these disparities, the society does not change.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 21DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 21