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  • Environment issues. Ozon layer

  • Have you ever used aerosol deodorant?
  • Or any other aerosol spray? I think, yes.
  • And for the environment that is not good.
  • Because more aerosol sprays have freon in composition.
  • Freon is one of the chemicals which have an adverse effect on the ozone layer.The ozone layer prevents most ultraviolet (UV) and other high-energy radiation from penetrating to the earth's surface.
  • But why is that a problem and why ozone layer is important?
  • First of all, the full radiation, if unhindered by this filtering effect, would destroy animal tissue and human skin.
  • Higher levels of radiation resulting from the depletion of the ozone layer have been linked with increases in skin cancers and cataracts.
  • Second of all, aquatic plants and animals are not safe too.
  • UV rays can penetrate through water and can kill small plants and animals.
  • If ozone hole keep on expanding, there would be very few plants which mean less food in the whole world.
  • Third of all, that problem increase in ozone present in the lower atmosphere.
  • Ozone in the lower atmosphere contributes to global warming and climate change.
  • In conclusion, I want to say that is very important to worry about the environment.
  • Because environment problems affect our lives and lives our future generations.
  • If you want to save the ozone layer you need to use fewer aerosols and choose fridge without freon.

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