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  • 18th May.

  • Today is Saturday, 18th May, Tomorrow is Sunday, 19th May.
  • Today I listen new music for me.
  • Today I listened some music that I don't known.
  • "Ma petite amie" give me her ipad then I saw that Xiomy's playlist, and now I'm listening some music, but in special a song, but not for the song, if not for the videoclip, its a man dancing and singing in the house, I feel identified with that, I love dancing and sing in house.
  • Today, in the neighbor's house was a party, and Xiomy felt a headache and she just bear with that, now she is very happy.
  • Today, I have a new cellphone and I need check it out how does it works?.
  • Last night, Xiomy watched a movie, and this morning she ask to me: somewhere else and other time, we had been girlfriend?, obviously yeah, but I don't understand why she said that.
  • Today I felt rare when in the park, we were sat and I said to Xiomy: "let's me bite your ear" and a boy said: "It's very sexy".

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  • câu 4
    • "Ma petite amie" give me her ipad then I saw that Xiomy's playlist, and now I'm listening some music, but in special a song, but not for the song, if not for the videoclip, its a man dancing and singing in the house, I feel identified with that, I love dancing and sing in house.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Today, in the neighbor's house was a party, and Xiomy felt a headache and she just bear with that, now she is very happy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • Last night, Xiomy watched a movie, and this morning she ask to me: somewhere else and other time, we had been girlfriend?, obviously yeah, but I don't understand why she said that.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Today I felt rare when in the park, we were sat and I said to Xiomy: "let's me bite your ear" and a boy said: "It's very sexy".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8