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Text from pabloahd94 - English

  • Venezuela

  • Hi for everyone, in this, i want to learn some english, or practice what i know about this great language, i want to start writting about where i live.
  • I am from Venezuela, and is great place, but i want to travel around the world, i am studying system engineer, its great career too.
  • I am 22 years old. when i was in the school i dont like english because i thought was a bored language and very difficult to learn.
  • But in 2012 i decide to learn this nice language and the teachers what i have in this course were great people, cause they know everything about the language, and i really like it.
  • But for economic crisis i decide to stop my studies in this language.
  • So i decide to learn by myself, watching movies, reading some news, and watching tv in this language, and i learn some words, and some grammar technics.
  • But i want to speak with native speaker to upgrade my skills.
  • PD: I dont know if the redaction of this text is the correct form because i have a lot of time i never write something in this language, i accept every correction you want to do, i really appreciate Well see you and thank for read this text

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Vakya 1
    • Hi for everyone, in this, i want to learn some english, or practice what i know about this great language, i want to start writting about where i live.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1
  • Vakya 2
    • I am from Venezuela, and is great place, but i want to travel around the world, i am studying system engineer, its great career too.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2
  • Vakya 3
    • I am 22 years old. when i was in the school i dont like english because i thought was a bored language and very difficult to learn.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3
  • Vakya 4
    • But in 2012 i decide to learn this nice language and the teachers what i have in this course were great people, cause they know everything about the language, and i really like it.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
  • Vakya 5
  • Vakya 6
    • So i decide to learn by myself, watching movies, reading some news, and watching tv in this language, and i learn some words, and some grammar technics.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6
  • Vakya 7
  • Vakya 8
    • PD: I dont know if the redaction of this text is the correct form because i have a lot of time i never write something in this language, i accept every correction you want to do, i really appreciate Well see you and thank for read this text
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8