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HI I'm Reza I would love to make some friends here and improve my English.
In exchange I can help you learn Persian :) someone can help me?

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- help
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句子 1
- HI I'm Reza I would love to make some friends here and improve my English.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- In exchange I can help you learn Persian :) someone can help me?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2