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  • The city of Turin

  • Hello, today I am writing about an interesting city of Italia: Turin.
  • Thank you for correcting my mistakes :) THE CITY Turin is for the most part known for being an important industrial centre, famous for its factories, such as Fiat (Fabbrica Italiana Automobili Torino).
  • Turin is a charming and pleasant city, with its baroque architecture and a lot of museum.
  • L’architecture de Turin est caractérisée par un baroque piémontais, c’est à dire non peint, laissant les briques apparentes.
  • La ville compte environ 24 km de rues en arcades, sous lesquelles on trouve souvent des cafés de qualité.
  • Today, Turin is known for its arch which is extended on 127 km, its avenues surrounded by trees, the residences of the Savoia and the palaces (or luxury hotels?) in Liberty style.
  • The city counts 926 000 inhabitants GDP/ inhabitants (1991): 25,8 millions lires (=117 400 francs) Number of enterprises of the province: 60 333 ART IN TORINO 1.
  • Egyptological museum The Egyptological museum of Turin is the oldest Egyptian museum within the world.
  • Built in 1824, it is the second biggest one after the Cairo’s one.
  • In 2013, the museum lured more than 540 thousand visits (exceeding the 537 thousand visits in 2006, when the city was hosting the winter’s games. 2.
  • La Mole Antonelliana Built in 1863, the Mole Antonelliana should have been a synagogue for the Jewish.
  • It is 167m and is one of the most awesome buildings in bricklaying of Europe.
  • At the top of the mole, we can see the entire city.
  • It has become the edifice of the new national museum of the cinema.
  • It’s also the symbol of Torino and you can see it on a 2 cents. 3.
  • Porta Palatina Is the ethnical spirit of the city.
  • At night, it becomes a market in open-sky (the biggest of Europe).
  • Composed of two polygonal tours of 30m high and 1.5 m width).
  • There are 4 entrances: two for the chariots and two for the passengers. 4.
  • Cattedrale di Torino The cathedral of San Giovanni Battista is a roman catholic church.
  • It’s the main cathedral of Turin because there is the Holy Shroud in it.
  • For the catholic, this is the sudarium. 5.
  • Palazzo reale (Royal Palace) The Royal Palace of Turin is an historical Italian edifice.
  • It is part of all the residences of the Kings of Savoia.
  • IL POLITECNICO The polytechnic university of Turin is an engineering university located in Turin and dedicated to the sciences and technologies.
  • According to / As for the classification of the worlds universities from the Institute of superior education of Shanghai “Jiao Tong” university, the Politecnico is one of the 30 most prestigious universities regarding informatics and is in the top 5 of the engineering universities in the automotive sector.
  • COURSES: - Mathematical analysis - Informatics - English, Italian - Political economy - Management and production control - Law and taxation / Human resources - Marketing - Data base - Energetic et ecology CAMPUS: Politecnico of Turin is an enormous campus constituted of three buildings dispatched in Turin.
  • The biggest and principal one has very big and lot of class rooms which can be far of 10 min walks away from each of them.
  • It also has lot of places where you can take a coffee or a snack.
  • STUDENT LIFE: Turin is a student city and it exists so many places where to make parties at night.
  • Some are more interesting than others, but all you have to know is that the entrance of night clubs is free and the price of the drinks are about the same than in France.
  • LIFE IN THE CITY: FOOD: - The Gianduoitto, a little chocolate with - The bicerin de Cavour: a hot drink composed of coffee, cold chocolate, milk, cream and cocoa - The agnolotti: rich in meal.
  • This is an starter made from fresh pasta or vegetables, eggs and grissini crumbled; usually served seasoned with butter and truffles, butter and sage or basted with a stock beef.
  • - The risotto COUNTRY’S IMAGE ABROAD What is the most surprising about Turin, is the harmony of its urban panorama, surrounded of impressive summits.
  • After a long history of emperors, kingdoms etc. Turin is now a strong metropolis turned toward the future.
  • It has the ambitions of city who comes from village at the bottom of a mountain to capital of a kingdom and a nation, but also of the cinema and the automobile sector.
  • Investment opportunities in Turin and Piemont AN INTERNATIONAL REGION Among the Italian regions, the international performance of the Piemont is exceeding the national average in terms of attractiveness, international business, formation and presence abroad.

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    • Thank you for correcting my mistakes :) THE CITY Turin is for the most part known for being an important industrial centre, famous for its factories, such as Fiat (Fabbrica Italiana Automobili Torino).
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • L’architecture de Turin est caractérisée par un baroque piémontais, c’est à dire non peint, laissant les briques apparentes.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • Today, Turin is known for its arch which is extended on 127 km, its avenues surrounded by trees, the residences of the Savoia and the palaces (or luxury hotels?) in Liberty style.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • The city counts 926 000 inhabitants GDP/ inhabitants (1991): 25,8 millions lires (=117 400 francs) Number of enterprises of the province: 60 333 ART IN TORINO 1.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • In 2013, the museum lured more than 540 thousand visits (exceeding the 537 thousand visits in 2006, when the city was hosting the winter’s games. 2.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • IL POLITECNICO The polytechnic university of Turin is an engineering university located in Turin and dedicated to the sciences and technologies.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • According to / As for the classification of the worlds universities from the Institute of superior education of Shanghai “Jiao Tong” university, the Politecnico is one of the 30 most prestigious universities regarding informatics and is in the top 5 of the engineering universities in the automotive sector.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • COURSES: - Mathematical analysis - Informatics - English, Italian - Political economy - Management and production control - Law and taxation / Human resources - Marketing - Data base - Energetic et ecology CAMPUS: Politecnico of Turin is an enormous campus constituted of three buildings dispatched in Turin.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • The biggest and principal one has very big and lot of class rooms which can be far of 10 min walks away from each of them.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • Some are more interesting than others, but all you have to know is that the entrance of night clubs is free and the price of the drinks are about the same than in France.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • LIFE IN THE CITY: FOOD: - The Gianduoitto, a little chocolate with - The bicerin de Cavour: a hot drink composed of coffee, cold chocolate, milk, cream and cocoa - The agnolotti: rich in meal.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • This is an starter made from fresh pasta or vegetables, eggs and grissini crumbled; usually served seasoned with butter and truffles, butter and sage or basted with a stock beef.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • - The risotto COUNTRY’S IMAGE ABROAD What is the most surprising about Turin, is the harmony of its urban panorama, surrounded of impressive summits.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • It has the ambitions of city who comes from village at the bottom of a mountain to capital of a kingdom and a nation, but also of the cinema and the automobile sector.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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    • Investment opportunities in Turin and Piemont AN INTERNATIONAL REGION Among the Italian regions, the international performance of the Piemont is exceeding the national average in terms of attractiveness, international business, formation and presence abroad.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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