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  • I do not want

  • (the original text is in spanish) The time arrived quick when the pleasant dreams committed suicide throwing themselves to the forgetfulness of the awakening adonis of an extraneous reality and without sense.
  • As hope mingled through the overcast clouds of a beautiful day on a lazy afternoon, and the breeze groomed me like a dog.
  • Then I said, I do not want to!
  • I do not want what the world presumes, I simply need the wealth of the simple and the abundance of the beautiful.
  • ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ¡Ya no quiero!
  • El tiempo llegó raudo cuando los sueños amenos se suicidaron lanzándose al olvido del despertar adonis de una realidad ajena y carente de sentido.
  • Mientras la esperanza se mezclaba entre las nubes encapotadas de un bello día en una tarde floja y la brisa me acicalaba como se acicala a un perro.
  • Entonces dije, ¡ya no quiero!
  • no quiero aquello de lo que el mundo presume simplemente me basta la riqueza de lo simple y la abundancia de lo bello.

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  • 문장 1
    • (the original text is in spanish) The time arrived quick when the pleasant dreams committed suicide throwing themselves to the forgetfulness of the awakening adonis of an extraneous reality and without sense.
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  • 문장 2
    • As hope mingled through the overcast clouds of a beautiful day on a lazy afternoon, and the breeze groomed me like a dog.
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  • 문장 4
    • I do not want what the world presumes, I simply need the wealth of the simple and the abundance of the beautiful.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ¡Ya no quiero!
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  • 문장 6
    • El tiempo llegó raudo cuando los sueños amenos se suicidaron lanzándose al olvido del despertar adonis de una realidad ajena y carente de sentido.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
  • 문장 7
    • Mientras la esperanza se mezclaba entre las nubes encapotadas de un bello día en una tarde floja y la brisa me acicalaba como se acicala a un perro.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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  • 문장 9
    • no quiero aquello de lo que el mundo presume simplemente me basta la riqueza de lo simple y la abundancia de lo bello.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9