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  • The paper rocket - Traducción del cuento

  • Once upon a time a boy whose big illusion was has a rocket and launching to the moon, but, he has little money and he didn’t buy someone.
  • A day, near sidewalk he discovers the box of him favorite rocket, but when he opened it, he discovered that only has a small paper rocket broken down, it was a result of on the production factory.
  • The boy was sorry too much, but he think the at least would have a rocket, He states to prepare a stage for launching it.
  • For many days he recovers papers of all forms and colors and he dedicates with him soul to draw, cut, paste and paints all the stars and planets for creating a paper space.
  • That was a very hard work, but the final result was so magnificent that him room wall looks like an open window to outer space.
  • From that day, the boy enjoyed every day plays with him paper rocket, how a classmate visits it, her room and when he see that beauty stage, he proposed to him changes for an authentic rocket that he has at home.
  • That moment it was close to making him crazy of happiness and he accepted the change delighted.
  • From that day, day by day, when he plays with your new authentic rocket, the boy miss him paper rocket, with the stage and planets, because he really successfully plays with your old rocket.
  • By then he realized that he feels better when he played with those toys that he makes by himself with his efforts and illusion.
  • And so, that boy started to build him toys himself and when he grow up, he turned on the best toymaker of the world.

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    • Once upon a time a boy whose big illusion was has a rocket and launching to the moon, but, he has little money and he didn’t buy someone.
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    • A day, near sidewalk he discovers the box of him favorite rocket, but when he opened it, he discovered that only has a small paper rocket broken down, it was a result of on the production factory.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2
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    • The boy was sorry too much, but he think the at least would have a rocket, He states to prepare a stage for launching it.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3
  • Vakya 4
    • For many days he recovers papers of all forms and colors and he dedicates with him soul to draw, cut, paste and paints all the stars and planets for creating a paper space.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
  • Vakya 5
    • That was a very hard work, but the final result was so magnificent that him room wall looks like an open window to outer space.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
  • Vakya 6
    • From that day, the boy enjoyed every day plays with him paper rocket, how a classmate visits it, her room and when he see that beauty stage, he proposed to him changes for an authentic rocket that he has at home.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6
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  • Vakya 8
    • From that day, day by day, when he plays with your new authentic rocket, the boy miss him paper rocket, with the stage and planets, because he really successfully plays with your old rocket.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8
  • Vakya 9
    • By then he realized that he feels better when he played with those toys that he makes by himself with his efforts and illusion.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9
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