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  • Health care by the private sector

  • Health care is one of basic human rights which should mainly be provided by the state.
  • Currently, there are a lot of paid medical centers that are represented by private sector companies.
  • Although some people consider that the state should provide health care, there are many advantages and disadvantages of health care which is provided by the private sector.
  • To start with, one evident benefit is that people can save time because of no queues and immediate medical attention.
  • In other words, you can make an appointment and arrive at the appointed time.
  • Another advantage is that the companies make their patients as comfortable as possible.
  • A case in point is that gentle music, a nice scent, luxurious sofas, tea and coffee can be offered by the private health care providers.
  • On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages of having a health assistant in the private sector.
  • Firstly, there is the high cost of services.
  • People often need to pay not only for a medical examination and procedures but there is a high probability of paying for the consultation of specialists also.
  • Secondly, you may be appointed unnecessary procedures.
  • Doctors can assign them so that you have to pay more money.
  • On the whole, health care that is provided by the private sector has its own pros and cons and neither of these outweighs the other.
  • The decision to choose the most suitable arrangement option is hinged on an individual's preference and financial capacity.

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    • Although some people consider that the state should provide health care, there are many advantages and disadvantages of health care which is provided by the private sector.
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    • To start with, one evident benefit is that people can save time because of no queues and immediate medical attention.
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    • A case in point is that gentle music, a nice scent, luxurious sofas, tea and coffee can be offered by the private health care providers.
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    • On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages of having a health assistant in the private sector.
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    • People often need to pay not only for a medical examination and procedures but there is a high probability of paying for the consultation of specialists also.
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    • On the whole, health care that is provided by the private sector has its own pros and cons and neither of these outweighs the other.
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    • The decision to choose the most suitable arrangement option is hinged on an individual's preference and financial capacity.
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