批改

從AHMEDHAMED369來的文本 - English

The food allergy
We must be serious about something called " the food allergy " .
The food allergy is a medical condition that causes you to react badly or to feel sick when you eat a particular food .
And it's important to be care about this thing .
To protect your children from it .
Because it can be deadly .
So, it will deprive us from eating particular kinds of food .
There are a lot of allergy kinds such as the allergy to eggs and the allergy to peanuts .
And the allergy to peanuts is an example of an allergy can be deadly.
In conclusion, we must protect our children from getting allergies because they are the important thing in our life

标题
- The food allergy
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- We must be serious about something called " the food allergy " .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- The food allergy is a medical condition that causes you to react badly or to feel sick when you eat a particular food .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- And it's important to be care about this thing .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- To protect your children from it .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Because it can be deadly .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- So, it will deprive us from eating particular kinds of food .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- There are a lot of allergy kinds such as the allergy to eggs and the allergy to peanuts .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- And the allergy to peanuts is an example of an allergy can be deadly.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- In conclusion, we must protect our children from getting allergies because they are the important thing in our life
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9