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My little dog is old
Hello, I have got a little dog, she is a Yorkshire, her name is Molly.
She is older, sometimes I feel sad because I notice that she can´t see and when she walks, she hits on the wall or in the door.
All the nights mi mother put her a diaper.
In 13 June of this year Molly will comply 14 years old.
But Molly has got a great appetite, she eats two or three sometimes per day, although she eats only pap.
After Molly wakes up, we must take her and carry to yard to she does piss.
All of these things we do everyday because she can´t do alone, this is our job everyday of all us.

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句子 1
- Hello, I have got a little dog, she is a Yorkshire, her name is Molly.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- She is older, sometimes I feel sad because I notice that she can´t see and when she walks, she hits on the wall or in the door.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- All the nights mi mother put her a diaper.
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句子 4
- In 13 June of this year Molly will comply 14 years old.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- But Molly has got a great appetite, she eats two or three sometimes per day, although she eats only pap.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- After Molly wakes up, we must take her and carry to yard to she does piss.
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句子 7
- All of these things we do everyday because she can´t do alone, this is our job everyday of all us.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7