添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

luis821からのテキスト - English

  • The best game for me.

  • Alan Wake is the best game for me.
  • The story is very exciting and Interesting since the first moment, to meseaure that you avance in the story discovery a lot misteries where our heroe Alan should fight with a dark presense and rescate to the his wife.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English